I think that this world may be flat. More or less. I haven't worked out exactly how the sun works.

Possibly the heroine won't find out, either.

Frieren: Beyond Journey's End, Vol. 4 by Kanehito Yamada

Spoilers for the earlier books.

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Went back to rework the opening and make it a firmer foundation. Had to know how the heroine discovered her powers up front to work on her making more subtle discoveries.

Am discovering bits and pieces that do not add up.

The heroine chooses which way to go based on severely limited information. She is going to have to learn what was the other way at some point -- in particular, because she meets some people on the way, and they had to have a reason to be there.


sigh

Frieren: Beyond Journey's End, Vol. 2 by Kanehito Yamada

Spoilers ahead for the first volume.

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How do the characters learn their new powers?

I scorn to use pop-ups. Besides, this isekai is not a RPGlit even if the heroine acquired a class, as many others do. So I say that the newcomers intuitively know what to do.

So now she has to learn subtle differences in what she had perceived as undifferentiated problems.

Intuitively.

sigh

The heroine  has been given the run-around.

She deduces it, but since "go heal those people' is something she should do, she tries to puzzle things out.

I am picking up the pace again, and thinking that section is really going to need some work.  I'm sending her to Mass, but it will take more.